Thanks for these questions, Jackie. I'll be thinking of them as I go to the next phase (reading the book out loud) of this soooo long editing process. I've been considering having a second round of editing with you, lighter than the first, so you can see what I've done with your suggestions. There's still a bit of head-hopping, but much less, and fewer rhetorical questions, and I've put the parents' stories in a separate "Part I." Would you be able to read it again anytime soon? --Pam Blair
Thanks for these questions, Jackie. I'll be thinking of them as I go to the next phase (reading the book out loud) of this soooo long editing process. I've been considering having a second round of editing with you, lighter than the first, so you can see what I've done with your suggestions. There's still a bit of head-hopping, but much less, and fewer rhetorical questions, and I've put the parents' stories in a separate "Part I." Would you be able to read it again anytime soon? --Pam Blair
Hi Pam, I'm so glad that this post was helpful for you as you continue with your revision and wrangle any pesky rhetorical questions. :)
I'd love to do a second pass review! Drop me a DM and we can go from there.